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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

The vision is a decent one, and the framing and composition are defenetly good as part of the vision (4 Stars). Although the idea seems original, I have seen this topic quite often (3 Stars). Even do most pictures look good in black and white, the technique is questionable, because it is too dark. I would have try to capture more of the smoke coming out of her mouth in order to achieve the title of the photo (2.5 Stars). If lighting and smoke capture are enhanced through another shot in the same scene, it could make a killer shot (2 Stars). I'm not trying to put the artist down, I thing the vision or intention of the picture is commendable, it just needs some tweaking in order to achieve it's maximum expression. Overall (3 Stars) You are in the right path, you can make it better!